hey, i read your story, and i really liked your style, i think you are an exellent writer, i was a little dissapointed at the fact that you began their relationship as if they were not verry close, and i think they were, just because you dont see alot of socalization,it dosnt mean it dosent happen, there are a few bits in the searies where you do see they are alot closer, in saying that, i think you had them behave pretty similar to how i thought they should, you did exellent with teal'cs character, but i thought daniel, was a little off too. maybe you should watch their mannerisyms a little closer, but then i guess you had to put your own spin on it, you really did do an exellent job, i hav read it a few times over, and i look foward to reading more from you :)

hey i havnt quiet finished this yet but im well over halfway through and i love it !! well done ;)