Story Anmerkungen: Hi, all. A little Missing Scene piece for you, centered on the end of Serpent's Lair. Not the reunion scene, though--instead that lovely scene with the Daniel-less team being rescued from space. I just love that one, don't you? Anyway, Danny's not in this at all, for obvious reasons, so you've been warned. He is here in spirit, though. Very much so.
I'd appreciate any thoughts, suggestions, comments, etc. you may have. Especially with regard to the characters and the emotional content-too much? not enough? redundant? confusing? off target? I'm still finding my feet with these characters, so any help is appreciated. I've played with it to within an inch of its life, so I figured I'd put it to you all and see what you think it needs.
Many thanks to my betas, especially my technical advisors. Any remaining errors are completely a reflection of my ignorance and certainly not their generous help.
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