Name: Eris (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.10.11 16:51 · Für: Chapter 2

I liked your story.  Someone needed to address that issue and you did an execellent job. 

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback - I appreciate it. I am glad you liked the story. I just felt like those issues would be addressed and we will never see them on the show...

Name: denise (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.10.01 18:50 · Für: Chapter 2

very nice. cause i think they will fight over it. and i can see him not wanting her to go, warring with acknowledging that she may not want to turn it down

 

course, maybe he can visit ;)

Name: T L Kay (Signed) · Datum: 2007.09.27 14:05 · Für: Chapter 1

i really enjoyed this. but i liked it a lot better without the intro, it was really neat the way you just get thrown into it.

Name: Rocza (Signed) · Datum: 2007.09.27 11:42 · Für: Chapter 2

Good fic. I think that Jack would a bottled it up and Sam would have had to drag it out of him a bit more. But the wording and feelings behind it are very accurate. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments. I am so glad you enjoyed it. I am still new at writing these characters. I've been watching lots of Stargate as of late, trying to get a better feel for how they talk and interact.

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