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Name: John (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.10.17 18:17 · Für: Chapter 1
good Job.
Name: Texan (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.09.19 11:47 · Für: Chapter 1
Well, that was certainly an interesting read Long too. But I think you need a Beta to proof-read things before you post them. Rather a big difference between canape and canopy. The first is a type of food, and the second is a type of covering. High heals or high heels. Not sure about the first one, but the second is a type of shoe. It's the small things like that that can change the meaning of a sentence entirely. But otherwise good, if a little on the verbose side.
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