Really good story. Enjoyed the way it could of all had happened if things had been different.
Such a great story! but please don't end it there! I was really getting into it!
I have to agree with all the other reviewers. I really enjoyed this story, but a little saddened that Sam had to give up SG1 - BUT she did get Jack. I hope you write further on this story, because I want to know whether the baby was a boy or girl, and more about Jack's family, as well as what happens with Jacob (I like him), and even what happens with Sam's brother, and generally how Sam and Jack adjust to being parents. PLEASE WRITE MORE ON THIS STORY! :-)
I am really enjoying the story. The writing is great, the characters are right on. I am wondering what is up with Teal'c being down so much and how are you going to handle Jacob's cancer. Will there be a way for him to still blend with Selmac and cure his cancer? You've done a great job of weaving actual events into your work in slightly different ways to account for no Sam on SG1. Can we have more please!
Very enjoyable story. Characters are well done and the writing is easy to read. Great Job. I am looking forward to more!
That's it? How... how cruel! Are you going to continue?? You can't stop there!
That is to say: "Great fic. I love it. Wonderful AU. Characters spot-on." An A+ for both this and Consequences.
I am really enjoying this and am looking forward to more.
Ahhhh! You can't stop here!! More please.
IS THERE ANYMORE OF THIS STORY TO COME. YOU CANNOT LET IT FINISH THERE