mmm I think my brain has emmm err yeah.... lol Brilliant and hot chapter I hope you are feeling alot better now Z
Author's Response:
I don't think it (a third party getting off while Jack and Sam make love) has ever been done before. I'm so glad you liked it.
I have good periods and bad. Am having a bad one just now. I am reminded of the TV show "Just Shoot Me," but of course I don't mean it. Pain sucks.
where are the emoticons when you need them?!? There is so much i want to say
Author's Response:
Thanx for the five star rating! I was worried you wouldn't like it, particularly the ending. I know Jack and Sam parted ways, but they will get back together in the next story in the series. And who knows what troubles they will have, and what treasure they will find.
I am eager to get back to writing the next story, but lately the medications I am taking are preventing me from concentrating. I am also having trouble writing responses to the reviews. I nod off quite easily, so please be patient while I get off these darned drugs. While I am recuperating, Pauline is busy working on the next story. So hang in there and we'll be back. hugs, ziva
Great ending loved it. I hope you make a full recovery soon Ziva. And looking forward to more of your stories and the ones you write with Pauline also.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I will tell Pauline what you said. She still thinks of herself as a poor writer, and I keep telling her what a genius she is when it comes to original plots. One day I would love to see her write a story all on her own.
To thank them for everything they’ve done for the country and the planet Dr. Elizabeth Weir has President Hayes grant Brigadier General Jack O’Neill and Lieutenant Colonel Samantha Carter their most dearest wish.
Lmao. Brilliant i love this lol More please missed your stories
Author's Response: Thanks I've had technical difficulties as well as writers block but I had to have Sam faint once.
pmsl More please wonder what Jack will say lol
Author's Response: tommorow
pmsl more more more
Author's Response: tommorrow
hehehe so looking forward to the wedding now and the wedding night hahahahahaha more please
Author's Response: The wedding is next chapter
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: At least I don't have to tone the love scenes down on this site
more more more please Pauline. That was a great short story so please write more or write another chapter love to see what Jack response is hehehehe
Author's Response: Hi Samcarter, took a bit of persueding but Ziva nagged me to do it, glad that you liked it. Actually now that you have mentioned it perhaps a Jack's POV could be managed. Got something else I am doing now just now, but will do.