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Continuum Interrupted by Merkaba

Rated: MA • 23 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: AU Stargate Story with major spoilers for Stargate Continuum. When Jack O'Neill is assigned to evaluate the threat Colonel Samantha Carter poses to his world he gets caught up in more then he could ever have imagined. Sam/Jack
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Date: 2010.08.30 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Memory

Love, love, love, love, love this story!  I even had this image of Charlie looking like Dean and then you go and mention the Winchesters and I had to chuckle to myself.  I must confess though, I was quite frustrated with you and how you wrote the dilemma of the memories of Colonel Jack being lost.  I kept thinking "Download him into the Asgard mainframe! Download him into the Asgard mainframe! They have the technology!" But still, I like the drama of how you wrote it.  It really pulled me in.  Nicely done. Awesome job. Two thumbs up. :D

Author's Response: Thank you for the awesome review.  That's funny about Dean and Charlie.  Colonel Jack's memories weren't lost.  Jack retained both sets of memories.  I thought about downloading him, but then I wasn't sure what to do with the memories.  Why would the Jack now want them?  I can't see Colonel Jack wanting to allow that either.  I'm glad you still enjoyed the story anyway.  I have a few other's I need to post here.  Thanks for reading!