I'm Tabitha, I'm 21, and I have a wonderful family. I spend most of my time writing, which is only natural since I am a novelist and a poet. Writing is my passion; it gives me an escape from every day life and also helps me to collect my thoughts. I have many interests which consist of mostly artistic things. My favorite author is Elizabeth Peters. She has found a very interesting story for her Amelia Peabody series. I am currently looking for a publisher who would be interested in my work because I want to make a career out of writing, even if it is just writing for a newspaper.
Coming SOON!
"Starry Prediction" A Early Edition/SG-1 crossover. Will Gary's secret be revealed? Or will the Stargate become public knowledge? Read to find out.
Wow, I totally got hooked on the first paragraph. Mainly because it immediately catches your attention with the hint that something horrible may have happened. But at the same times it relieves some of the anxiety the reader experiences when worrying about Sam. That little comment about jack's gem sort of refers to one of Jack's many idiosyncrasies, one being his tendency to remark sarcastically to difficult and stressful situations. (I apologize if my review is a little off. I'm completely and utterly exhausted. Also, I can barely even think about what I'm typing. Again I apologize)
I finally got together the time to finish your story. Very nicely done by the way. I'm looking forward to more.
Ok, I'm only writing this because the server is not letting me respond to the last review. So here's my response. Thanks for the correction about Jack's eyes. I haven't watched SG-1 in nearly two years because I can't afford cable. Lol. So I'm a little rusty here. But I love the show now as much as ever. *huggles*
Um, wow. That's the first mildly threatening review I've gotten. But anyway. Don't worry about Sam. And the story isn't about to have a depressing ending. Also, I am slightly offended that anyone would try to hamper my artistic expression. But yeah, no hard feelings I guess. It's a suggestion I suppose and I'll take it as that.
That was pretty darn good. I definitely had a reaction. Emotional of course. But yeah, it was definitely a very detailed and solid story. It had me really hooked. I love Jack/Samantha stories. Well, Jack and anyone really. He is really freakin' hot. *gets starry eyed* Though I can point out something very very minor. For sleeping together they wouldn't be necessarily prosecuted. The military just basically threatens that in situations like this. It's like an unwritten rule, not 100 percent grounds for court marshaling someone. But other than that, definite an good. And you really had the thoughts of both Jack and Sam down pretty tight. It takes a talented writer to be able to write both male and female thoughts, especially when dealing with sexual content. Ok, I'm done with this review, way too long I know.