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You Can Call Me Sir by Grizziesmom
Rated: MA • 96 Reviews
Summary: When Sam is brutally raped by a virtual stranger, Jack helps her cope and discovers some things along the way.
Date: 2007.07.21 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Settling In
The dreams were a very nice touch!-Reading on
Date: 2007.07.21 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Set Up
Well done! It lookslike the plot is coming along very nicely! -Reading on
Date: 2007.07.21 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - A Day in the Sun
The vacation was a great idea, however I am waiting for this 'program' twist - Reading on
Date: 2007.07.21 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Still Can't Go Home
The emotional development of Sam is very intresting and makes for great reading, again your exicution of the chapter has impressed me. -Reading on
Date: 2007.07.21 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In Trouble Again
This is a well writen Kheb episode, however in the chapter I would have linked it revalance to the story, or are you just telling the story over time? if so use creative transitions to help smooth the chapter breaks over. Other wise, very well done! -Reading On
Date: 2007.07.21 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Nintendos?
Nothing new, great jpb on ligistics but relivancy is key! Transition, but the rest is very well done! - Reading on
Date: 2007.07.21 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- I HATE Waiting
Hizza the plot reveals itself again! Again, a well writen chapter, that also explains the previous. A sugestion could be made about melding the two chapters togeather for a more coherient thought proccess but I like what you have done none the less, well done! -Reading on
Date: 2007.07.21 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Still Waiting
Short sweet and to the point! I love it! - Reading on
Date: 2007.07.21 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Exploration
Love the emotional upheval in Jack, yet how are you going to play it out? - Reading on
Date: 2007.07.21 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Time for Vacation
Ahhhh intresting relationship twists, I love it.....-Reading on
My Lover's Back by Samandjackforever
Rated: AO • 2 Reviews Summary: Short PWP from Sam's POV. 'All she can see is him'
Date: 2007.07.21 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Very nice!, dreamy impresionistic POV via Sam that alows us to see into her mind. Thank you, it is a very well writen pice! Pelase keep writing!
A Life Undone by Telkena
Rated: AO • 34 Reviews Summary: An AU version of S&J get a visitor. But who is this Jack for real?
Date: 2007.09.02 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I am in love with the plot! You have done such a great job with the characters! The only sugestion i can make is to watch your pronouns, they are a little confusing somtimes. You have tallent that is breath taking, so I will read on...
Author's Response:
Yes, I know the pronoun issue. My beta reader corects that, but I guess sometines they do slip her attention too. I'm glad youlike the story though. Thank you!
Date: 2007.09.02 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Totaly cool! I'll keep reading!
Author's Response: Glad you like it. Thank you.
Date: 2007.09.04 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Very well done! I love what you have done with the story thus far!
Author's Response: I hope the rest will be just as pleasing. thank you.
Date: 2007.09.04 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Very Moving! I'll read on...
Author's Response: Thank you, please do...
Author's Response: Thank you, please do...
Date: 2007.09.04 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Pra-vo! I Love it, and I'll read on....
Author's Response: Thank you. Please enjoy the rest.
Date: 2007.09.09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Very well done, I'll read on because as you have said, the story continues! Then, I do as well....
Author's Response: Wonderful there's still stuff to be read.... And smut as well..... Have fun.
Date: 2007.09.09 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Very moving! I'll read on..
Author's Response: I'm glad youlike the emotional side of it. Hope youlike the rest.
Date: 2007.09.09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I am so happy, Yes I am! Damn you GOOD! Twists are you specality! I'll keep reading....
Author's Response: Not really, but this whole fic seemed to be...... something else.... I am quite cliche and predictable really.... I plead insanity and some sort of possession to explain how this fic came out to be so...... different..... It was the voices!!! They told me to do things..... *nods*
Date: 2007.09.09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Pra-vo! Well done! I'll read on....
Author's Response: Thank you thank you, please enjoy....
Date: 2007.09.10 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Very well played plot line and development of characters. I would have liked an actually "yes", but that is what sets us appart as writers....YOU have done a great job, keep writing and amazing us with you tallent and imagination!
Author's Response: I actually find the whole marriage proposal scene painfully cliche (unlike the rest of my fic *cough*) So I went for a bit of "variation" on the yes answer.... I'm glad youliked i.And awww.... you think I have imagination.... *sniffle* how sweet is that.... *sniffle* that's just..... touching..... *sniffle* Thank you.
Date: 2007.10.28 Title: Chapter 1: Protected by the Djebu
Can't wait for more....
Needing to live by Faithless
Rated: MA • 4 ReviewsSummary:
She needed to stay alive to tell him it was not his fault
Date: 2008.05.31 Title: Chapter 4: Part 4: Epilogue
Good addition!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I wrote it cause someone said the story lacked smut. So I wrote cheesy smut
Date: 2008.05.31 Title: Chapter 1: Needing to live
Thus far this is a very intriguing story! Reading on...
Author's Response:
This chapter was supposed to be the whole story. I wrote it as a drabble with an open ending, but people asked for more
Date: 2008.05.31 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2
Very well written, again, reading on...
Author's Response:
After I wrote chapter 2 I had to write chapter 3