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You Can Call Me Sir by Grizziesmom

Rated: MA • 96 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: When Sam is brutally raped by a virtual stranger, Jack helps her cope and discovers some things along the way.
Reviewer: merkaba Signed
Date: 2007.07.23 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - You Can't Go Home

Good writing!  I have read stories of Sam being attacked before and they always seem to turn her into a wimpering idiot.  While she obviously has alot to go through, you do a great job of showing that Sam is still the same strong woman she has always been.  You show her vunerabllity and fear without taking away her fundimental strength.  You stay very true to the character... all of them actually.  I am really enjoy the story and your writing!



Reviewer: merkaba Signed
Date: 2007.07.23 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - The Waterfall - Day

This is really good.  I'm hooked.  I can't believe it is 1am and I haven't finished feeding dogs and horses!  I only intended to read one chapter and read the whole thing.  Please post more.  Can't you hear Jack and Sam saying... "Finish us... Finish our story..."

Seriously, you have created a great story that is very much character driven.  You move the story along at just the right pace so that their actions seem very true to what they might have done.  More please.  I am channeling my inner Jack "Write more now... Thats an order"  :-)

 

 



Author's Response: Here's hoping you got your chores done and some sleep too!  Thanks for the psoitive feedback...as following orders, I'm doing some cleaniing up on the next couple chapters....might be a couple days, sorry....But I'll do my best to fill the space ASAP.



Reviewer: Merkaba Signed
Date: 2007.08.24 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - It's About Time!!!

Very good chapter! I loved how you melded your story with the actual episode.  The double meaning in the discussion at the bottom of the ramp was great.  The writing is, as always, amazingly wonderful. You keep the characters really believeable.  I am really enjoying this.  Thank you for all of the new chapters to read! 



Reviewer: Merkaba Signed
Date: 2007.08.24 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Making Plans...House Plans

I'm really enjoying the whole story.  I can hardly wait to see if and how Jack's words about thing blowing up in their face come back to haunt them.  More please!!!!!!



Crowns and Magic Mirrors by Luzita

Rated: AO • 12 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: Sam and Daniel accidentally step through the quantum mirror into a post-apocalyptic Earth, and discover that the absolute ruler of this neo-medieval society has a very familiar face.
Reviewer: Merkaba Signed
Date: 2008.03.22 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like when I stumble on something really different.  This is good.  I'm really enjoying the story.  Any chance of an update soon?



Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback.  I am working on the next chapter, but I don't think I can say it will be up soon.  Sorry to disappoint. I am disappointed myself I haven't gotten more done on this, but I have some RL issues going on.



I Nearly Lost You. by Emmauk26

Rated: AO • 12 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: Jack comes close to losing Sam on a mission, but will it make him tell her how he feels or will Pete get in the way?
Reviewer: Merkaba Signed
Date: 2009.07.29 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interesting story.  I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you, i hope you enjoy the next chapter.



Another Bad Day by ziva

Rated: AO • 3 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: This is an old story I wrote in 2007. It's about Jack and how he tries to cope when Sam ....   Nope, not going to tell you!  You will just have to read it.
Reviewer: Merkaba Signed
Date: 2012.01.16 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I haven't seen this one of yours before.  Interesting start.  On to the next chapter.