Good writing! I have read stories of Sam being attacked before and they always seem to turn her into a wimpering idiot. While she obviously has alot to go through, you do a great job of showing that Sam is still the same strong woman she has always been. You show her vunerabllity and fear without taking away her fundimental strength. You stay very true to the character... all of them actually. I am really enjoy the story and your writing!
This is really good. I'm hooked. I can't believe it is 1am and I haven't finished feeding dogs and horses! I only intended to read one chapter and read the whole thing. Please post more. Can't you hear Jack and Sam saying... "Finish us... Finish our story..."
Seriously, you have created a great story that is very much character driven. You move the story along at just the right pace so that their actions seem very true to what they might have done. More please. I am channeling my inner Jack "Write more now... Thats an order" :-)
Very good chapter! I loved how you melded your story with the actual episode. The double meaning in the discussion at the bottom of the ramp was great. The writing is, as always, amazingly wonderful. You keep the characters really believeable. I am really enjoying this. Thank you for all of the new chapters to read!
I'm really enjoying the whole story. I can hardly wait to see if and how Jack's words about thing blowing up in their face come back to haunt them. More please!!!!!!
I like when I stumble on something really different. This is good. I'm really enjoying the story. Any chance of an update soon?
Interesting story. I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you, i hope you enjoy the next chapter.
I haven't seen this one of yours before. Interesting start. On to the next chapter.