When a seemingly normal mission goes badly wrong things don't look good for Jack and Sam.
Well done. I love that Janet was in the story. I definately think you need to do a sequel.
Author's Response:
Hi and thanks for your comment, i'm so glad that you enjoyed it, i would love to do a sequel to it, i'm just not sure when i could do it. I've got
one story that needs a beta, one that i'm in the middle of writing, and loads of ideas. Lol so i'm gonna have to at least finish the two i'm on then
hopefully i can do it then. And i plan on having Janet in it alot, again thanks for your comment it's made my day he he, ;-D
Hi and thanks for your comment, i'm so glad that you enjoyed it, i would love to do a sequel to it, i'm just not sure when i could do it. I've got
one story that needs a beta, one that i'm in the middle of writing, and loads of ideas. Lol so i'm gonna have to at least finish the two i'm on then
hopefully i can do it then. And i plan on having Janet in it alot, again thanks for your comment it's made my day he he, ;-D