Loved it! Great short piece :)
excellent!!!. she says her hands not unlike the evil Mr Burns that Jack so loves>!!!
LOL! Funny and way hot. What a great take you have on the characters. The dialogue with the weapons and Sam and Jack carrying on, THEN Daniel's parting words - genius! A well done read.
Deliciously funny and very steamy. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this: you have a great way with their voices, keeping it in character even when they're doing an (or so deemed, but WE know the truth) OOC event.
None the less, a pleasant read and I thank you for it! Keep it up (no pun intended for Jack)!
HA-HA, Daniel's the best.
This was great! Daniel's comments at the end had me literally laughing out loud!