lol great short story, keep up the good work
Very cute. I liked it. I don't know why but I do. Very unique perspective. You know, your 'clit' voice sounds an awful lot like my 'little devil on the shoulder' voice. That's making me rethink just who that voice is...
one of the funniest fics i've ever read. i agree tho.. there should be a sequal. haha
okay, at first when i read the title, i was like wat the hell? but after reading it...wat the hell? lol. it was "interesting" if that's even the word for it. but i have to say that i enjoyed it and it was quite funny. good job.
This was so much fun!!! How about a sequel from Jack's POV. This time letting his . . . equivalent . . . do the talking. <vbEEg>