Name: Jules (Anonymous) ·
Datum: 2007.06.04 21:07 ·
Für: See Me, Feel Me, Touch Me
The beginning provided the perfect tension for the end, in my opinion. It was really nice to read how the tension was solved in the end. The descriptions were very nicely written and it was very enjoyable to read. I also like the 'yoo-hoo gun' bit which I thought was hilarious! Overall, very good job on the fic! Write more!
Name: Twobits (Anonymous) ·
Datum: 2007.05.31 21:06 ·
Für: See Me, Feel Me, Touch Me
Thanks for the story I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.