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Name: De (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.08.13 10:14 · Für: Eavesdropping and the Applications of Slang
I liked this story quite a bit as I have a fondness for Sam/Martouf pairings. The only problem I have with this fanfic is that 90% of Lantash's intended lines are missing from the wtory, which makes for a very distracting read. I'm not sure if the file was corrupted or what, but can you fix it? Please?


Name: Melissa (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.05.29 01:52 · Für: Eavesdropping and the Applications of Slang

I know that there was supposed to be internal convo between Martouf and Lantash and there are phrases like:

 "My symbiote snickered" 

but there isnt any actual convo between them.

 

Other than that it was very good!!!!!

 I really liked it!!



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