great story please finsh
Wow, this is gonna have to be a Great sex scene if it's taking so long to write ;)
I realy like your stories, can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you like them.
Lovely addition, can't wait to read your next chapter!
Has anyone heard what's happening with the S&J Archive? To sad if we loose that wonderful archive of great stories!
Author's Response: Alimoo1971 said the company that hosted the site had been hacked into and several sites suffered as a result of it not just the fanfic one. Hopefully Siler is on the situatation and the site won't be lost. Usually those who post a site have a copy in the program they used.
Another great chapter! These two will hopefully figure out that they are falling in love before they end it!
Sounds like the next chapter should be very interesting!
Author's Response: It gets interesting especially when the Tokra show up
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: At least I don't have to tone the love scenes down on this site
Great update! Sounds like our love birds are taking in love!
Author's Response: That was the plan
hehehe so looking forward to the wedding now and the wedding night hahahahahaha more please
Author's Response: The wedding is next chapter
Love this story, hoping you find the means to make those two realise the feelings they already had for each other by this point and have a real marriage...I'm sure you won't disappoint us!
Author's Response: You'll like where it goes and the ending I have in mind is great.
pmsl more more more
Author's Response: tommorrow
Very humourous, looking good.
Author's Response: Thanks Jack's reaction was realistic I thought.
pmsl More please wonder what Jack will say lol
Author's Response: tommorow
This is going to be amusing, can't wait for Jack to find out.Glad that you decided to post it.
Author's Response: Thanks I have to tone down these hot scenes for fanfiction.net as well.