this story is the bomb it's brilliant.

you certainly have a way with words.

good luck with any other stories you write.

Author's Response: You have totally made my day.  I hope you enjoy my other stories.  Always working on one...

I really enjoyed this story!  It has a great mix of eroticism with a very well-written relationship of love and respect between Vala and Daniel.  And great use of the rest of SG-1 in the story!  I can't imagine the team, after being together for so long and going through so much, not being a huge part of each others lives.Ironically, after I read this story I clicked on your author name and found that your other stories were also ones that I've enjoyed in the past.

I'll be looking forward to reading about parenthood in the next installment (and I hope you choose to continue it).  It'll be so fascinating to see what parents, with Daniel and Vala's unique life experiences, will choose to teach their children about the universe, life, etc.  Although it's an extremely Daniel/Vala centric story I hope you'll have Teal'c and the rest of the team play a role in the raising of the children.  It would be really interesting to have Uncle Teal'c offer to train them in the Jaffa warrior tradition, which he didn't really have a chance to do with Rya'c.  Maybe Master Bray'tac could even make an appearance?  I'm also curious to see whether Teal'c will reveal more of the events that transpired on the Odyssey since events seem to be repeating themselves and there doesn't appear to be much danger of a paradox being created anymore.

Anyways keep up the good work; I'm excited to read more! 

Author's Response: Thank-you so much for the positive feedback.  I've strayed away from this story for far too long and I really need to get back to it.  Your encouragement has inspired me to do so.  Thanks so much.

I really enjoyed this...it was hot.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Congrats. really, i enjoy very much this story, more, i want more  :D    Than you and good luck. I be waiting the adventures of parenthood of Daniel and Vala. and i love the Sam and Jack to because i am a fan of them. So keep going.

Bye and kisses. 

Author's Response: Thank-you.  I will definitely be working on it.  I am currently finishing up a post-Continuum piece but will definitely get back at this one this week.