So smarmy Martouf is a Frenchman. The Root Vegetable is Pete. The Sexy captain is Jack, and the blonde Doctor.is Sam. Like the dramatis personae.
The cast is ready to cast off. Looks like a good read especially with Sexy Jack.
All we need is Walter Brennan for a side-kick and we could have the plot for a Humphrey Bogart movie.
Author's Response: Thanx for reviewing. It's always great to hear from someone new. Sidekick is more of a Johnny Depp type. ;)
I really like a lot! different and fun love story for Jack ans Sam. This my favorite couple that I love.
Author's Response: I love hearing from new readers. Thank you!
Glad to see this site is back up, I've been reading your updates to this story on samand jack.net and must say am glad at the ending, very well done. I can't seem to logon to that other site, so am leaving you my happy review here.Captain Jack was a nice story and glad they finally got together as a couple.
Love your new story "Blind date" too. All 14 chapters have my 10+ rating if I could logon to it, so am doing it here too. Am on pins and needles on "Blind date". Poor Jack seems he feels so badly for himself and is understandable considering his age difference and sexual needs too. His character is so lovable cause here he goes sacrificing himself for Sam's happiness. Hope somehow you fix things for them. Glad to see your still writing.
Author's Response: I am glad you were able to read the remainder of this story without waiting. As for writing, I will probably have a pen in my hand, or be at my keyboard, when I die. I could never stop writing! But I may branch out into other areas. I love Sam and Jack and Stargate, but I'm afraid interest in them is dying. Until then, you will find me here or at samandjack.net. I can't imagine why you can't log in. If you got a message that your member name or password are not correct, you should write to the website manager. Thanx for being a faithful reviewer. xo
I wish these two would talk to each other about the obvious feelings they have for each other. Guess cupid must bring them together and be on the same page. Keep up the updates, know you'll keep this interesting.
Author's Response: The suspence begins with chapter three. I hope you enjoy it. Thanx for the great rating!
Lol even without regs in the way they are blind and so pathetic. Love it. Keep it coming. Glad he isn't trying to mess it up by picking up a one nighter.
Author's Response: Nope, our boy is too in love to do that. We are so glad you are enjoying the story. Thanx for the good review!
Very nice start to what could be an interesting story ahead. Awaiting new update on this tale of the seas, maiden, and handsome Jack.
Author's Response: We hope you will give us a full five stars by the time this one is over. ;)
Lol I love it you to ladies come up with the most fun ideas for Captain Jack. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Oh, good! I was afraid you would hate it. z
hey Ladies. I am bad for not checking on here more i have been so busy here at home and doing other stuff online i missed out on this story. Omg what a story very very hot too hehehe. Am I forgiven?!?
Okay just got a chance to read this story this weekend. Loved it except that even without the regulations Jack is an ass. lol Of course I want more you can not leave us there we need closure at least. He can not stay out of Sam and his childrens lives. I mean seriously. Loved the Captain Jack and Sam adventures looking forward to reading more.
I so love you stories, especially the Captian Jack series. I would love to read more of their adventures.
Thank you for such a different look at our two heros.
Another great story, although the ending seemed a bit rushed. Hopefully you will continue th series
Oh more PLEASE, got to have MORE
Author's Response: Okay, your vote for more Captain Jack stories has been recorded. We will do our best. Thanx!
I think one last adventure might be in order and you can work out that relationship between our two heros. Maybe Daniel can help them find their final treasure!
Author's Response: Like Pauline said, we will do our best. Thanx for sticking by us through these trying times. We really appreciate all of our readers. hugs, P & z
Hi Everyone. The site stops me answering direct, but I just wish to say, thankyou to all who read and reviewed. Life hasn't been kind to either Ziva or myself lately. But if you guys want another Captain Jack, just say and we will do our best.
Well if u make another =( lol id like to see them fix things between them. hearing more about the baby would be a bonus and i really liked the adventures series so if u could come up with another it would be cool . If u didnt it would be cool too. =)
Awww... it's over. Please write more Capt. Jack stories. I'm craving for it and I can't wait for more. Maybe you two can make them a bit longer, so it wont be over quite so fast. You do an awesome job. so PLEASO MORE!!!
Awww u should do more =)
Author's Response: Thanx for your feed back, but we need to hear from more readers before we decide to do more Captain Jack stories. Also, tell us if you want a baby-centric story, an adventure w/o the child in it, an adventure with the child in it, or something totally different. We really want to hear from you guys! P & z
Another great story in your series. I always shudder when Rodney is involved, his character never did fully grow on me...
Author's Response: We didn't like Rodney either, as you can probably tell. Thanx for reviewing! And it's good to be back. P&z
Another great story! A completed new story would be great as an Xmas present.
Author's Response: Hi, ziva here! Thanx from both Pauline and myself. We are so happy that you enjoyed our story. As for the sequel, I have no idea when it will be finished. I haven't gotten the first draft from Pauline yet, and once I do, it takes me at least a week to crank out a finished product. All I can say is, we will do our best!
Good thing there is another story cause what a lousy place to leave us. awesome job but evik stoppinh point!!
Author's Response: This is ziva and I am here to say that it's not my fault. *ducks and runs for cover* I sometimes think my friend and co-author has an evil twin hiding inside her, but I love her just the same. Read what I said to Lynn.
Pmsl What!! lol loved the ending more please i love what you both come up with
Author's Response: And we love that you always take the time to review. We wish more people would, 'cause it gets lonely out here in cyberspace. ;) THANX from both P and me.
Oh Pauline, how could you want to leave it there? Just like Jack, open mouth insert foot as I cannot see this ending really good for them. Sam will misunderstand his outburst, and Jack will probably not get a chance to explain his surprise :( Now I must sit on pins and needles for the next installment, and I am not sure how I will survive - lOl!!!!
Author's Response: Since Pauline is having trouble leaving responses, I will respond on her behalf. Er...uh... NOPE! I have no excuses or explanations for the ending. But what I told P, after I read it, was that she had better hurry up and write the next story, or you guys will find her and do her harm. LOL And I can tell you, after hearing a synopsis of the plot, you guys are gonna love it!
I love it so far and on my desktop I can write reviews.
Author's Response: Thanx! I enjoyed your little PWP. Am still fanning myself. LOL
Uh Oh...Sam probably has a concussion so Jack better find a way to keep her awake, and while my mind is in the gutter, that probably is not the best way to do it - lol!
Author's Response: Oh, I don't know. It works for me. LOL
Hi Schatze, have to respond this way, can't get in. Thank you for reviewing and yes! the nasty Samuels has gone to meet his maker. Glad that you came over !