Good addition!
Author's Response:Thank you, I wrote it cause someone said the story lacked smut. So I wrote cheesy smut
Very, very well done! It was written well, and had an exceptional plot! I cannot wait to read more of your material...
Author's Response:Thank you, of what I remember the end was a bit cheesy. But it was the fist ‘real story’ I wrote.
Thanks again, glad you liked it
Very well written, again, reading on...
Author's Response:After I wrote chapter 2 I had to write chapter 3
Thus far this is a very intriguing story! Reading on...
Author's Response:This chapter was supposed to be the whole story. I wrote it as a drabble with an open ending, but people asked for more